Love Rekindled (Double Dodoitsu)

By Christopher Rupley and Jadedmess

His complexion was bloodless,

tourniquet tightened and the

pallor showed his empty veins –

starvation triumphed 

She entered these four corners,

vitality and beauty

inundated his frailty,

drenching him with love

(This is a poetic collaboration between myself and Jadedmess. This is a double Dodoitsu, and the count is 7-7-7-5, 7-7-7-5. Please make sure and check out the rest of her amazing work by visiting Jadedmess).


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