Longsuffering (Tetractys)

 

By Christopher Rupley

 

Oh!

Why do

I always

have to be the

strongest person I know when I suffer?

 

My integrity is chiseled out of

the pain I bear

when alone;

I am

one,

 

I

cannot

believe the

ghosts in my head

telling me my pain is my companion,

 

Is it not called longsuffering for a

reason? Am I

to wallow

with no

prize?

 

© Christopher Rupley

 

(This form is called Tetractys and since there are multiple stanzas, each one after the initial stanza is inverted in count. Thanks again, Lerene)!

 

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7 thoughts on “Longsuffering (Tetractys)

  1. Thanks! It seems like every time I find one, I find ten more just around the corner. I’m loving it! I’m just trying to pay it forward, and I’m getting a lot of love from some great writers on WordPress too. I feel like I’ve got a whole family here, albeit one that spans around the world 🙂

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  2. Thanks! I’m trying not to run out of steam! I’m getting a lot of support though. I just keep writing every day…I might call on you in a bit to do a Renga with me, Jaded and maybe, Phen. It’s a 36 lines collaborative form of Japanese poetry. Keep your eyes peeled. Still not sure when yet, though…

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  3. It is, and the way it looks when written with multiple stanzas reminds me of the way some concrete/formed poetry can look – taking on the appearance of shapes, etc…

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